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Hi everyone! To celebrate (almost) finishing editing my book, I have posted below the first chapter of it. It should be err free since I have gone over it probably the most, but if you spot anything (much to my consternation) please let me know. Enjoy! Sorry that it is double-spaced! Too much time to fix it....
Chapter 1
Aaron and Amy
It was a warm afternoon, just the kind you would expect for
the middle of September in Washington State. Aaron, a fifteen year old boy,
walked out of his high school with his twin sister, Amy.
“Man, not a really nice day,” Aaron remarked as he walked
down the street with his sister.
“It could have been worse,” Amy replied.
“Okay, you call losing
our last bible study member because he wants to watch some crazy movie with his
friends,” Aaron said, “learning that dad is going on another international
business trip so we will have to stay with Aunt Ruth a whole month, and on top
of that both of us getting “C’s” on our geography tests, not so bad?”
“Well, the bullies
didn’t bother us today, they could have stolen our lunches again,” Amy replied
almost sarcastically.
“The bullies” as every kid called them were a group of teens
who seemed to delight in causing trouble . . . and seldom got punished for it. Aaron
and Amy’s high school was a private school and the bullies’ parents were rich. Not
only did the parents pay the heavy bill to have their kids in this school, but
also they tended to be “generous” with their money in giving many donations. The
school, afraid of losing this “funding”, tended to overlook some of the bullies
pranks.
“It seems like
everything has gone wrong since mom died.” Aaron still tried to hide the
moisture in his eyes that sprang up when he talked about his mom.
“Well, we can’t
really blame dad. He mourned mom even more, I think, than we did, and really
just put us in private school because he didn’t know what to do,” Amy said
quietly. "But, Oh! Don’t you
remember the days when mom homeschooled us?”
“Yes, I do, Amy. Those were some of the best days! But let’s
not talk about that anymore. When do you think we will leave for Aunt
Ruth’s?"
“Oh, well I think dad leaves on the 28th, so we
will probably be dropped off on the 27th.”
"Don’t you think we are old enough to take care of
ourselves? I mean we both are 15." Aaron sounded exasperated.
“Yes,” Amy agreed,
“but I think he just wants us to be safe ever since we lost mom. But,
Look! There is Michael over there!"
she exclaimed. “It looks like they haven’t left yet.”
“Yeah,” said Aaron, “but look at those kids he is with.”
Michael, the kid who attended Amy and Aaron’s Bible study,
was standing with a group of teens dressed mainly in black. The teens were not
"the bullies" themselves, but the type of kids who wanted and tried
to be accepted into the group.
“Let’s go see if he has changed his mind,” Amy urged. The
two quickly crossed the road and made their way to the group.
“Hi Michael,” Aaron said, trying to ignore the other glaring
teens, “are you sure you don't want to come to our house for our Bible study?”
"Aaron,” Michael whispered, glancing back at the
others, "you are going to really embarrass me!"
“What?" Amy stared at him.
Suddenly the oldest of the teens, a boy with ear piercings,
stepped in front of Aaron. "And are you sure that you want to go home and
read that six thousand year old pack of fairytales?" The boy scoffed. “You
could come with us. The movie, I hear, has some great R-rated scenes."
"Yeah, she would
fit right in!” A girl in tight black jeans sneered, pointing at Amy's long
skirt. A chorus of laughter backed the remark.
"Come on, Amy."
Aaron grabbed Amy's hand and led her away from the crowd.
“What? Are you
afraid?" The oldest teen laughed.
Aaron turned around, but looked not at the teens. His green-gray
eyes searched Michael’s. "Michael, are you coming?"
Michael's eyes pleaded with Aaron to understand. "No,"
He said, turning away.
Aaron turned and
walked away with Amy.
“I can't believe that
boy!" Amy said a few minutes later. "hanging out with those kinds of
kids over going to a friendly Bible study at our house is crazy!"
“It is funny what people you get involved with when you want
to “fit in” or prove you are not a wimp," Aaron said, shaking his head.
“Yes," Amy replied. ”Aaron, I want you to know that I
am proud of you for the way you handled that situation."
“Thank you," Aaron opened their house gate for Amy,
“and Amy, mom would be proud of the way you still wear long skirts.”
Amy nodded unable to
speak and passed into their house.
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Next week a few days before Aaron and Amy's trip to Aunt
Ruth's they were preparing for their Bible study. They had convinced (while
nobody else was around) Michael to come.
Amy moved a lamp to the corner of the coffee table and set a
candle in the center of it. “What if there was another world?" She asked
suddenly.
“What do you mean?" Aaron replied, setting a Bible with
the name Aaron J. Carpenter (Carpenter is Aaron and Amy's last name) on the
sofa.
“Well, what if there was a way to travel into another world
no one has ever been to before." Amy failed to light the candle the first
time with a match.
"That's impossible!" Aaron called over his
shoulder as he walked into another room.
"Yeah, probably . . .” Amy trailed off to herself
finally getting the candle lit.
When Michael arrived he seemed rather stand-offish and
embarrassed, but he was quickly put to ease by Amy and Aaron who did not bring
up the event of last week.
The three friends had
just sat down and opened their Bibles when there was a loud crash.
“What was that?" Michael asked, looking towards the
wall from where the sound had come, but before anyone could answer several
things started happening at once. A Large crack suddenly appeared in one of the
walls and grew wider and wider till it looked like invisible hands were tearing
away the studs and drywall. Then, as if the hole in the wall was a great vacuum,
things started being sucked into it.
The kids jumped to their feet in amazement. Sofa pillows, lamp stands, and cabinets
disappeared through the hole first. Then several chairs flew by them, and the
sofa they had been sitting on slid along the floor and flew into the hole. All
the furniture was swept away except the coffee table with the lamp and snuffed
out candle that somehow miraculously still stood on its top. Then another
strange thing started happening, the carpet started being ripped up by the wind
and underneath it showed not the wood floor, but cold, black rock. The walls
all around the teens grew growths of the same until all of the walls were
covered with black rock.
Aaron stumbled forward and clutched at the coffee table
which was the only thing left in the room. His hand closed over a small box, but suddenly he tripped and fell over the rock floor. A stalagmite grew out
of the ground right in front of him, and suddenly the coffee table was swept
away. The lamp on it was jerked away from its socket that was now disappearing
into the rock, and the room went pitch black.